Visiting my Dad’s work place

The experience I had at my Dad’s work place.

  • What did I hear, I heard a lot of things like people ordering their food other things
  • What did I smell, I smell food, paint, and contraction concrete
  • What did I feel, I felt cold breeze from the open door from the out side

everyone is nice and work well people are nice every where it really has a good environment

what would discourage me are people that just cause trouble in the place and we have to clean on what they have done

i would like to try to be an store employee

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