AI vs My paragraph

MY PARAPGRAPH

            “I always say that I didn’t choose ballet– ballet chose me.” I chose this quote because I can relate to it. As a dancer I would say that I didn’t choose dance (ballet) chose me. “Dance to me is connection, creativity, love, a way to tell a story, and that’s why I do it.” I relate to this because dancing allows me to express myself through music and a way to tell a story. “How does dance make me feel? Is it even a feeling, or is it a moment, a dream, a reality? I only know that I am myself fully when I am onstage dancing. That’s where I feel safe and right at home.” Dance is home to me, my friends a dance partners are where I feel safe, when I’m on stage instead of focusing on “am I going to forget my choreography” I’m focusing on trying to share my love for the art of dance. “I think the mental health of our dance community is just tender right now; not having an outlet to move in a physical space—that’s such a part of how we process.” During the pandemic I related to this a lot, I didn’t have much space to keep practicing dance and I think it affected my mental health because dancing was such an important part of my life.

AI GENERATED PARAGRAPH

Dance, with its fluid movements and rhythmic expression, serves as the canvas upon which I paint my emotions and experiences. Each step, each gesture, becomes a brushstroke, conveying the depth of my feelings in a language beyond words. In the graceful arcs of my body, I find liberation, a freedom to express the ineffable aspects of my soul. Through dance, I can embody joy, sorrow, passion, and longing, transcending the confines of everyday expression. It is in the pulsating beat of the music that I find synchronicity with my innermost self, allowing me to shed inhibitions and embrace vulnerability. Dance is not merely an art form; it is my sanctuary, where I am unapologetically and authentically myself, weaving stories with every movement, and finding solace in the rhythm of existence.

 

  • What was your experience in using AI? The AI paragraph used a lot of complex wording and it was very easy to use but you have to be very specific with it or else its give you something different than what you wanted.
  • Was the paragraph the AI generated accurate? Fact-check any new information and see if it’s true.Yes, the AI generated paragraph was very accurate and I liked how it talked about musicality and storytelling because I can relate to that a lot.
  • Was the exercise useful? How can this help you with your learning going forward?The exercise was a little useful I don’t think I will be using the websites very often though it was very hard to find new information about my subject.
  • Were your results expected? Yes or No? Explain.Yes, I expected the AI generated paragraph to use a lot of big words and sound very formal (a little too formal) and I think it did just that.

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