Information Fluency Paragraph

For my subject, I chose to write about women in sports, it’s something I’ve been passionate about since I was much younger. I’ve always enjoyed learning about different women who have encountered diversity in their lives and pushed past it to achieve their dreams. I’ve listened to many speeches growing up from varying intellectually and emotionally strong women.  

 

My Paragraph: 

Women have broken many barriers and changed standards in sports. Through their dedication and hard work, women have not always been given the same opportunity as men. Throughout the years, women have worked hard to make sports a more welcoming environment for young women and girls, giving them opportunities. Women such as Hayley Wickenheiser has broken many male and female records for ice hockey. She has worked hard throughout her entire career to achieve her goals. Additionally, Furthermore, women’s sports have garnered increasing attention and support, leading to significant advancements in gender equality within the sporting world. Initiatives promoting inclusivity and diversity have opened doors for women of all backgrounds to participate and thrive in sports. Women continue to challenge stereotypes and advocate what they believe is right in an area of knowledge mostly dominated by men.  

AI paragraph: 

Women in sports have long faced challenges and stereotypes, yet their contributions and achievements continue to redefine the landscape of athletics. Despite historical barriers, women have excelled in various sports, showcasing their athleticism, skill, and determination. From pioneering athletes like Billie Jean King and Wilma Rudolph to contemporary stars such as Serena Williams and Simone Biles, women have shattered records and inspired generations. Increased visibility and support for women’s sports have led to greater opportunities and representation, empowering female athletes to compete at the highest levels. However, disparities in pay, media coverage, and resources persist, highlighting the ongoing need for gender equality in sports. As women continue to break barriers and redefine norms, their impact on sports transcends competition, serving as a catalyst for social change and inclusivity. 

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  • What was your experience in using AI?  

AI seemed to reference my subject in larger terms, while I focused on subjects, I know a bit more myself, such as Ice Hockey and Tennis, it went on to bring up gymnasts and track and field. AI also used different vocabulary words that I don’t tend to use on a regular basis, it provided a different perspective on the fluency of words. 

  • Was the paragraph the AI generated accurate? Fact-check any new information and see if it’s true. 

Yes, I felt like it was reading about it. With further inspection, it seemed more like AI used this subject to reach into a more of a broader term, expanding into different areas I didn’t originally write about. 

  • Was the exercise useful? How can this help you with your learning going forward? 

I learned that I could be more detailed in my descriptions and make better use of the given vocabulary. 

 

  • Were your results expected? Yes or No? Explain 

I feel like the AI results compared to my own were expected. It went into further detail than I did, as well as naming more athletes. The sentence and paragraph structure were on point, obviously because it’s AI, while mine seems like it was made from a template, which it was. 

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