My paragraph
Title: A little girl’s Cake Business
In Warrick’s story from 2021, he wrote about a little girl who started baking cakes at just 11 years old. It all began on Mother’s Day when the girl shared bundt cakes with her neighbors. Soon, people wanted more of these delicious treats, and that’s how Lovely London Delights came to life. This tale shows how even kids can chase big dreams. The girl got inspired by watching fun baking shows like Nailed it and Sugar Rush, after watching these shows she wanted to try it. Sometimes, things did not go as planned in the kitchen, but mistakes were seen as part of learning. It also talks about how the girl’s grandpa, who was very dear, passed away. In honor of him, the girl decided to donate some of the money earned from the business to help others. It’s a sweet tale of a girl attempting to follow her aspirations.
Ai paragraph
Title: Young Entrepreneurship in Baking: A Sweet Success Story
Warrick (2021) narrates the inspiring journey of a young entrepreneur who embarked on a cake baking business at the age of 11, amidst the challenges of the pandemic. The narrative captures the initial spark of entrepreneurship ignited by a simple act of kindness on Mother’s Day, which quickly transformed into a full-fledged bakery venture named Lovely London Delights. This story exemplifies the resilience and determination of youth, showcasing how passion and opportunity can converge to create a path to success. Moreover, the narrative reflects on the role of external influences, such as baking shows like “Nailed It!” and “Sugar Rush,” in shaping entrepreneurial aspirations. It raises questions about the diverse sources of inspiration that drive individuals, highlighting the importance of familial bonds and shared experiences in fostering a love for baking. The account also acknowledges the inevitable setbacks and failures encountered along the entrepreneurial journey, emphasizing the valuable lessons learned from perseverance and resilience. Furthermore, the narrative touches upon the profound impact of personal loss, as the young entrepreneur channels her grief into philanthropic efforts, exemplifying compassion and altruism. Overall, Warrick’s narrative underscores the transformative power of youthful ambition and the ability to turn adversity into opportunity through passion, determination, and a sprinkle of kindness.
What was your experience in using Ai?
I learned many innovative ideas from using AI generated paragraphs although most of the ideas were repeated. One thing I realized while doing this assignment is that you can easily tell whether the paragraph was written by a person or by using AI, another thing i noticed was that Ai uses advanced writing vocabulary words.
Was the paragraph the AI generated accurate? Fact-check any current information and see if it is true.
The AI paragraph had similar ideas with the paragraph that I wrote, the information was correct and did not have any misinformation. Even though the AI paragraph was like the one I wrote, Ai does not always have the correct information.
Was the exercise useful? How can this help you with your learning going forward?
Yes, this exercise was helpful to me. I could use this in the future if needed to get inspiration for creative writing. Although everything that AI writes may not be true, it can be helpful with getting ideas and it can be a great tool to help with learning.
The results exceeded my expectations, when I first skimmed through the paragraph I was impressed with the word choices that were used but later when i was thoroughly reading the paragraph, it was remarkably like the one I had written.
Were your results expected? Yes or No? Explain.
The results exceeded my expectations, when I first skimmed through the paragraph I was impressed with the word choices that were used but later when i was thoroughly reading the paragraph, it was remarkably like the one I had written.