What about the environment will discourage you from waking up every day to attend work?

There are 2 things that’ll discourage me if I were to work at my garden. The first is that when I use the fertilizer, it smells very bad and the smell stops in 30 minutes. The second thing is that when I mow the lawn, it’s slow because it’s heavy to push and it stops after every 30 seconds, so I must pull the string very hard to make the lawn mower work again.

What do you hear, see, smell and feel in the work environment on Nov 2nd?

At the garden, I hear a loud roaring sound which is my mower and I hear a sloshing sound which comes from the hose my grandparents use to water their plants. I see an L-shaped planting area with dirt and crops (fruits and vegetables), a grape vine and a pear tree. I also see a shed which has my mower and gardening equipment (gloves, tools). I smell fruit and vegetables that are about to ripen up. I also smell the fertilizer which isn’t that good. At the garden, I feel happy because once the fruits and vegetables are ripe, they’re good to eat because I like fruits and vegetables.  I normally feel tired after mowing the lawn because it takes 30 minutes and I need to pull the string hard which wastes my energy.

Thank you for reading my blog. If you want to comment them, please be polite and clear. I gave some tips on how to comment other people’s blog.

Think before you comment.

Thinking before commenting is good because it is important to consider the following elements:  your comment makes sense, is formal, is polite, is on topic and has no grammar/spelling/typos. If you got a grammar part wrong and you wrote another word that meant something else, it won’t make sense when the person who wrote the blog sees it. It is recommended that you write it on a piece of paper as a draft and then post as your final copy.

Be polite.

I suppose being polite is a good thing because if you have insults in the comment, the person who wrote the blog would be offended. Instead it is better to say some good things in the post like “This is helpful” or “It’s really interesting.”

Stay on topic.

Staying on topic is a good thing because when you post, you only talk about their blog. If you don’t stay on topic, it doesn’t make the meaning of your comment clear and it gets mixed up.

Be clear.

I believe that clear comments make people understand them better because if you make a very short comment, then nobody knows what you’re trying to say about my post. Be specific because I need to know if the comment is good or not.

Sample: Basketball tricks

“Hey Adam, thanks for sharing your tips. They help me a lot and they’re phenomenal. You’re good at posting some helpful tricks. But next time, can you please share some harder tricks.”