DL 10 final project

Something that I am indeed proud of from this school year is my improvement in essay writing. A big amount of credit does go to my English teacher Ms. Turpin who helped me develop better English skills this semester. To be specific, I used to have a tendency of using big words but always going off topic which would always complicate the message I wanted my reader to understand.
For proof, I have 2 essays from this semester that show my improvement from starting off with a “C” grade level on essay writing and then later improving that to a “B” grade level.

C grade:

B grade:

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