French 9 – Redaction 2 Correction

In french 9, part of what we learned was how to write a proper paragraph. For our second redaction, we were given the topic of our favorite place. I chose my grandparent’s vacation home in the Italian Alpes. After we wrote it, we had to correct it together in class. We had to identify the different types of sentences, linking words, and grammar mistakes. I am proud of it because it is well written and it does a good job of describing the small town that the house is in.

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